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She needs to know

from MikeySpikey - Monday, March 28, 2005
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Hi, My name is Mikey. I wrote this song. Do ya'll out there like it?!
Holla!

(SHE NEEDS TO KNOW)

(Verse 1)
This song is written to all the fellows
To tell your ladies how needed they are
You need to tell em' how much they mean to you
Or they'll fade like a shooting star
You gotta do this as soon as possible
Tomorrow may never come
Doesn't matter what time of hour it is
All that matters is you get it done

(Chorus)
She needs to know that she is beautiful
She needs to know she's heaven sent
She needs to know that she your property
Assured you'll be there to the end
She needs to know that she is talented
And that you're proud how far she's come
She needs to know she's all you're living for
She needs to know she's your number 1.

(Verse 2)
I feel sometimes I treated you so wrong
I feel sometimes you felt unsure
I know sometimes I took you for granted
I know sometimes you felt insecure
I wanna thank you girl for lovin me
I wanna thank you for being my friend
I wanna thank you for standing by me
I know on you I can depend

(Bridge)
And there were some times when I felt all hope was gone
I played this whole thing wrong baby
And there were some times when I felt you didn't wanna see me
Didn't wanna hear from me at all
And there were some times when words came out of my mouth
I Shouldn't have said them
For all of those times, I apologize

(Outro)
This song is written for all the fellows
To tell your ladies how much they're worth
You need to tell them how much they mean to you
Or they'll just fade away.
You gotta do this as soon as possible
Tomorrow may never come
It doesn't matter what time of hour it is
All that matters is you get it done

(Chorus)
She needs to know that she is beautiful
She needs to know she's heaven sent
She needs to know that she your property
Assured you'll be there to the end
She needs to know that she is talented
And that you're proud how far she's come
She needs to know she's all you're living for

She needs to know she's your number 1.

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from Samuel
Friday, April 20, 2007 - 06:58

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Okay, Mikey, this was far too sappy, even for me. In fact, no offense meant, but it sounds almost like a Family song (think "Anna From Heaven" ).

There is some truth to it. It's true, tomorrow doesn't always come. Think of the people that died in the massacre at Virginia Tech the other day. The never got a chance to say goodbye. But I agree with the comment below about how it does matter what time or hour it is, (don't wake your girl up to tell her you love her).

The woman needs to know that she is still beautiful to you, but your property? WTF? What is this, man, Saudi Arabia? And PLEASE don't go telling her that you're "proud of how far she's come" as if you're better than her or something, unless you want her to fade away like a shooting star. Unless your girl has low self esteem, I don't think she needs to be constantly reminded of how much she's needed, how much she means to you, how beautiful she is, how she came from heaven, that she's talented, and that you'll be with her till the end. And she must have very low self esteem to not run for the hills when you tell her she's your property.

But the rest is good, if your woman likes sap. Work on the chorus, man, and it might not be all that bad. Perhaps you could send it in to Sanjaya- looks like he has quite a few young female fans (but not enough to keep him on American idol).

Best of luck!



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from Rain Child
Friday, April 20, 2007 - 01:22

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Oh no....glad I missed that when it was posted. Any girl who needs to be told all that crap needs therapy. For your information, we will not fade like shooting stars if you don't constantly feed us cheesy lines to boost our egos. You'll probably find too much of that crap will have them fading away though...Anyway, the property issue's been covered to death; hope you took it to heart Mikey.
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From Don't Try This At Home
Friday, April 20, 2007, 08:44

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What if someone actually listened to this song?

Man: Honey, I want to tell you that you're needed.

Woman: (smiles) That's sweet, baby, I need you too.

Man: And how much you mean to me. You mean the world.

Woman: Well, you mean the world to me too.

Man: I feel it's very important that you know that, because you know, tomorrow may never come.

Woman: Uh...okay.

Man: So I just wanted to tell you and get it done with.

Woman: Are you feeling okay?


Man: Yes, honey, and you're very beautiful.

Woman: Why, thank you. I was wondering when you were going to notice my new shirt.

Man: And you're Heaven sent...

Woman: What?

Man: Just for me. You're my property.

Woman: (backs away) WHAT?

Man: And I'll be with you till the end.

Woman: Well, I sure hope so. Because talking like that you'll have a hard time finding any other women.

Man: You're so talented.

Woman: (turns around) Talented at what?! You're just trying to butter me up. You're so insincere!

Man: I'm very proud of how far you've come

Woman: (gets up from the couch) Now, what's that supposed to mean? Why would I need a moron like you to be proud of my accomplishments?

Man: I thought you'd like it. This guy wrote a song and posted on Moving on. He said I should tell you how needed you are, and how much you mean to me...

Woman: How original. You'd rather quote me the lyrics from a sappy song than tell me something that comes from the heart. Real smooth. I'm going to bed.

Man: But honey, you're my Number 1.

(woman walks away)

Man: I sure she doesn't fade away like a shooting star.

(woman throws a sleeping bag and pillow at the man)



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From figaro
Friday, April 20, 2007, 13:30

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haha(reply to this comment
from flutterfly
Thursday, April 19, 2007 - 23:47

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Not sure how "new-fashioned" it is to have the word "fellows" in a song. Unless it's a country song. Is it?

And just another observation: just because a man loves a woman, it doesn't mean she's his property. That sounds male-chauvinistic to me. But maybe you didn't mean it that way.
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From figaro
Friday, April 20, 2007, 00:52

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I don't think he meant it that way, I think he is just an idiot when it comes to women. (reply to this comment
from figaro
Thursday, April 19, 2007 - 21:14

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thats about as original as a rap song about bitches, cars and money.
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from noregrets
Thursday, April 19, 2007 - 15:07

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Oh poor thing!! I'm torn between laughing my head off, or maybe just giving him a break cause he's obviously "smitten". They say love is blind, deaf, dumb, stupid, retarded and my list goes on as I've been guilty of becoming a mindless zombie after falling in love.

I would give him a break because of that, but, the song in it's self...

Sounds like old BSB, Five, Westlife or any of those boybands. Speaking of which, I was thinking to myself the other day how boybands aren't dead at all, they just put on "punk" hair styles, got a little angry and call themselves things like simple plan...

As for "she needs to know" all I can say is: she really needs to know...

you won't quit your day job.
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From noregrets
Thursday, April 19, 2007, 15:10

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eeek! he does do this for a living, oh well.

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from valhalla
Thursday, April 19, 2007 - 13:08

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dude every other boy band has covered the same subject just in diffrent words and no offence but i doubt the ladies will get infected with blissfull emotion once they hear those mainstream lyrics = *girl your so fine...wanna make you mine*..ect....anyhow i guess if it works for you ..great! but i got some serious doubts on this MWM sing along.
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from XD Hahaha
Saturday, January 21, 2006 - 11:35

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LMFAO!! Dude, you are being slated!! For the record, I didn't think it was tooooo bad. The "property" line suxx big buxx tho'.
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from xolox
Sunday, April 24, 2005 - 22:03

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Blows!
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from mia1
Sunday, April 24, 2005 - 20:30

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ur song sucks

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from Odyssey
Tuesday, March 29, 2005 - 12:34

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Well if you gotta tell her in order for her to know, then I tell ya boy, you're doing it all wrong.
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From figaro
Thursday, April 19, 2007, 21:12

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i agree(reply to this comment
from Joe H
Tuesday, March 29, 2005 - 12:03

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I'll bet you also think we should say "I love you" one hundred times a day.
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from Harikari Voodoo Vandari
Tuesday, March 29, 2005 - 01:21

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>>You need to tell em' how much they mean to you
Or they'll fade like a shooting star<<

Most men that constantly SAY, are the ones that don't really MEAN. Always beware of a man who looks you deeply in the eye without flinching, just to say "I love you"

>>Doesn't matter what time of hour it is<<

Women tend to get irritated when you wake em up at 3:45 AM..... STARE...."Honey, I love you". "What!? Jezuz Krist joe, go borrow a porn film or something."


>>She needs to know that she is beautiful<<

But she's not, and she knows it....

>>She needs to know she's heaven sent<<

But she knows I don't believe in heaven


>>She needs to know that she your property<<

Well, I know it's depreciated, but how much can I trade in for?

>>Assured you'll be there to the end<<

Yep, I will be there till the end. And I will decide when it ends too.

>>She needs to know that she is talented<<

But she...

>>And that you're proud how far she's come<<

You definitely consider yourself superior huh?

>>She needs to know she's all you're living for<<

Yeah, so she'll know you'se a liar.

>>She needs to know she's your number 1.<<

Hope she doesn't snap back with "well then, who the fuck is 2?"

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from Fwenzip
Tuesday, March 29, 2005 - 01:11

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~Tell me baby gurl cause I need to know.......
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From M&M
Tuesday, March 29, 2005, 12:32

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Oooh, I like that song.(reply to this comment
from Sonderval
Tuesday, March 29, 2005 - 00:58

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I hate it for more reasons than I have time to go into while at work, sorry. But don't take it too hard, I hate lots of things and have fairly high standards in music.

Oh, one reason I will definitely mention is you have an appalling attitude towards women, I mean come on, "She needs to know that she your property". Are you single at the moment my friend? I really hope so, either that or I hope that your girlfriend gets a little self-esteem soon and moves on.

But what the hell, what difference can one more bad musician make to the music business, it's full of whiny annoying corporate shills already.
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From MikeySpikey
Tuesday, March 29, 2005, 01:50

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You don't like much.... DO you?!

Much love


Mikey


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From weegirlie
Tuesday, March 29, 2005, 01:42

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Yeah, the whole song sounds like this person considers women second class citizens. If someone sang it to me I'd probably slap them in the face. How UNflattering to the poor girl it's intended for!(reply to this comment

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