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Unattractive!

from Hanna_Black - Friday, October 25, 2002
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Sounds better when it's sung, one day when I am a star (wish, wish) you can hear it on MTV.

We were sitting on the little bench
the one with "I love you"
etched in its leg.
I asked him if I mattered, why he cared,
He only shook his head.
He said, "the other guys are talking,
saying stuff and making fun,
They think I'm dumb
For going out with you."
So I closed my eyes and hoped
He wouldn't see the tears
Or say that he was sorry
I wished it wasn't true

(Chorus:)
I said "I'm sorry I'm unattractive
I wish that I were beautiful
I'm sorry but I can't help the fact:
That I am just the girl next door.

I thought that I could fall in love again,
That I could fall in love anew.
He looked at me and smiled as he spoke,
Good-looking and so cute.
He said "the minute that I saw you walking in
I thought I'd seen you before
I laid my eyes on you.
Let's go outside and have a little fun
I know that we just met
But what else can we do?"

(Chorus:)
I said "I'm sorry, I'm unattracted
Simply cuz you're beautiful
I'm sorry, but I can't help the fact:
I'm looking for a little more

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from Anthony
Saturday, November 02, 2002 - 18:37

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You were almost beautiful
Almost good enough
But your mind is dull
And youre made of the wrong stuff

DISCLAIMER: The above verse is not addressed to anyone in particular.


Regards,(?)!
Anthony


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From Hanna_Black
Saturday, November 02, 2002, 18:42

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Whew, I though you meant me...LOL(reply to this comment
From Anthony
Saturday, November 02, 2002, 18:45

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LOL! No, I don't mean you at all, in your case, quiet the opposite, I should think.


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from annoyed
Wednesday, October 30, 2002 - 20:28

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is this website going to degenerate into a bunch of women singing to their vaginas?
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From Jules
Wednesday, October 30, 2002, 21:08

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Don't tempt me.

Has anyone here seen the Vagina Monologues? It sure beats Puppetry of the Penis.

"My vagina's angry. It is. It's pissed off. My vagina's furious and it needs to talk." (reply to this comment
From jessi
Thursday, October 31, 2002, 03:34

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Need any help whipping it into submission? :P(reply to this comment
From Jules
Thursday, October 31, 2002, 08:29

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Thanks, but I have it covered. :)(reply to this comment
from Tankard
Wednesday, October 30, 2002 - 19:42

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German alcholic trash metal rulez!
----------------------------------

IM SO SORRY ! [Tankard]

(Music: A.Gutjahr/O.Zissel/F.Thorwarth)
(Lyrics: K.Pohl/A.Geremia)

My life is without meaning

Nothing I do makes sense
My mom has always told me
That I am good for nothing

Metal! Metal!

Ray of hope
Metal! Metal!
Its my dope

Im sorry that Im ugly

Im sorry that I stink

Refrain:

Im so sorry! Im so sorry!
Im so sorry! Im so sorry!

Nobody likes my belly

They dont like it when I sing
My pockets always empty
I have to sponge around
Metal! Metal!
Ray of hope

Metal! Metal!

Its my dope
Sorry, I have bad manners
Sorry, Im impotent

Refrain:

Im so sorry! Im so sorry!
Im so sorry! Im so sorry!

Nobody likes my belly
They dont like it when I sing
My pockets always empty
I have to sponge around

Metal! Metal!

Ray of hope
Metal! Metal!
Its my dope

Sorry, I have bad manners

Sorry, Im impotent

Refrain:

Im so sorry! Im so sorry!
Im so sorry! Im so sorry !
Im so sorry! Sorry, sorry! Im so sorry!
Im so sorry! Sorry, sorry! Im so sorry!
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from Prot
Sunday, October 27, 2002 - 14:45

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Shallow.
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From Hanna_Black
Tuesday, October 29, 2002, 18:27

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Sorry, Sir, I won't do it again, sir.
i will pray against this spirit of shallowness right away, Sir. Please forgive me and I heartily accept the six month silence restriction and foolish poem writing forbid. Lord help me.

---Geez, whattya wanna hear?(reply to this comment
From faeriraven
Wednesday, October 30, 2002, 16:09

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Don't listen to him girl, I thought it was great! It's good that you're brave to post up here w/ all the criticism that this site throws around! Good for you!(reply to this comment
From Hanna_Black
Wednesday, October 30, 2002, 17:39

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tx faerie. at least thomeone likth me...(reply to this comment
From BITCH
Wednesday, October 30, 2002, 17:21

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;)(reply to this comment

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