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from faeriraven - Monday, October 21, 2002
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from not again
Wednesday, January 05, 2005 - 14:56


"matchstick men hanging on a wish to die"

now that's definitely mine!

hmm.. not cool.

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from Hanna_Black
Friday, October 25, 2002 - 14:52

hey, that is real good. sorta sounds like some of the stuff I write. Hee hee!
I like the matchstick men part.
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from sarafina
Thursday, October 24, 2002 - 19:56

Oh God girl, That was Awesome! I can't even begin tell you how many times I've felt that way and for the very same reasons you wrote this. I just want to give up sometime, life and love are both just a constant battle and stuggle and sometimes you just get tired of trying.
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from JoeH
Wednesday, October 23, 2002 - 15:43

this is pretty good, I like the rhythm - the way you cram lots of words (and meaning) into each line. The choppiness wasn't too bad either, it was just a matter of reading it correctly, you know, emphasizing the right syllables. Good stuff!
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from Jerseygirl
Wednesday, October 23, 2002 - 07:05

Faeri,this is a great piece.
"we take on this charade so we can be understood" - damn correct observation! Words of encouragement are moot and cannot come from a person such as myself but I wish you all the best.
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