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No life

from MagicGreenPants - Saturday, September 21, 2002
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Here something I came up with once upon a time

There's no living in my life anymore
the seas have gone dry and the rain stopped falling
please don't you cry anymore
can't you see
listen to the breeze, whisper to me please
don't send me to the path of nevermore

Even the valleys below
where the rays of the sun were so warm and tender
now haven't anything to grow
can't you see
why did you have to leave me
why did you deceive me
you send me to the path of nevermore
when you say you didn't love me anymore

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from Jules
Friday, December 27, 2002 - 11:51

So did Freddie Mercury steal this from you? Dude, you should sue.
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From MagicGreenPantz
Friday, December 27, 2002, 15:46

Dont you have anything better to do than constantly critisize my lyric searching abilities?(reply to this comment
from Dani
Friday, December 27, 2002 - 09:22

Like it!!
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From MagicGreenPantz
Friday, December 27, 2002, 15:49

Thankyou D, I'm glad someone appreciates the power of CTRL+C & CTRL+V!(reply to this comment
From Dani
Friday, December 27, 2002, 18:22

It's not my fault that you can't measure up to my wonderful writing abilities. (reply to this comment
From MagicGreenPantz
Saturday, December 28, 2002, 12:45

...or your conceipt.(reply to this comment
From JoeH
Monday, December 30, 2002, 20:57

do the English put a silent 'p' in there? not trying to start another spelling debate, just curious(reply to this comment
From MGP
Saturday, January 04, 2003, 16:06

no they dont(reply to this comment
from dave
Saturday, September 21, 2002 - 21:05

One of the best pieces of writing I have read in a long time. Pensive.
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