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The Injustice of Me

from moonmental - Monday, September 16, 2002
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I omitted a line the first time

you hate
the injustice of me
painting the faces of my mind on yours
stirring your thoughts like embers
feeding your fire
to see you burn for me

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from Cultinvator
Tuesday, December 02, 2003 - 15:25


Joe's a dense idiot don't worry about him.

I thought it was a great poem, it's beauty lies in its simplicity and direct approach to power IMO
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from JoeH
Wednesday, September 18, 2002 - 18:16

whoop di freaking doo!
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From moonmental
Wednesday, September 18, 2002, 23:58

whatever?(reply to this comment

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