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Scratching through the surface

from Free_Dom_Fighter - Friday, August 09, 2002
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It’s hard to see with my black eye
But somewhere deep beneath my skin
Crawling where no one has been
It’s watching. Everything I do
Control with every subtle move
Near the surface, scratching through
My mind. And I can hear its speech
It tells me I am in its reach
Feeding feelings, bleeding leech
The poison liquid tastes of bleach
It’s listening to every lie
It causes every tear I cry
The eerie sparkle in my eye!
My nemesis and my ally
Can trap me with a lullaby.
. It’s too hard to see with my black eye

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from Joe
Friday, August 09, 2002 - 19:57

was that last line a joke? I mean it makes sense but it sounds kind of tacked on
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From Free_Dom_Fighter
Friday, August 09, 2002, 23:17

Yes this does indeed suck quite severely. What more can I say?--I'm not exactly the disturbed poet type--I'm just hoping I'll get a rise out of seeing someone post a comment on this crap that makes me sound like some sort of true twisted genius...but it looks like no such luck for me today.

To see something a little closer to how my mind really works, check out 'Lancelot.' :-)(reply to this comment
From JoeH
Saturday, August 10, 2002, 00:35

I think I like you dude! one simply has to be candidly self-loathing, it balances out the inflated ego thing(reply to this comment

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