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from VWBabe - Saturday, July 27, 2002
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Written when I was 11 and really wanted to leave the F - sad now to read how hard I tried to fight it. I didn't know anything else though...

Torn between the land and the ocean
Can I truly 'walk on water'?
Farther out...
The waves of fear crash down
Unexpectedly knocking me to my knees.
Guilt grates on my skin
Like sharp grains of sand.
Pulled under against my will
Drawn under the current
Fighting hard
Hardly fighting
Powerless to do so
I am to fragile to fight this wave
Slipping slowly
Into the dark...

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from Albatross
Saturday, July 27, 2002 - 22:01

Wow! you wrote that when you were 11? I'm in love! But it did give me the chills.
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From C
Saturday, July 27, 2002, 22:40

Al, your affections are fleeting! Shall I remind you of a certain, Lewis Carol quoting young lady to whom you've already pledged your love? ;) (reply to this comment
From Albatross
Saturday, July 27, 2002, 23:07

Ah...C. True...what is it with me and women who quote/write poetry? "Le Albatross e mobile";)(reply to this comment

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