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Something about Love

from cyborcosmic - Friday, March 21, 2008
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This is a poem written by my sister Jasmine almost 1 year before her death

One Love, your sister

Something about love
that perhaps I can not say;
how it sways with ebbs and flows
and crashes with the waves;

It takes you out to oceans deep,
and brings you back to land;
And all the while there's so much more,
below the surface of the water;
below what people see;
And parts so deep,
they've never been charted;
places so dark,
that mountains evolve;
And life grows,
unknown to those up on the shore;

And all these ebs and flows and crashes,
And journeys out to sea;
Can go on record to be discussed, evaluated,
judged, and so forth;
But the essence of the water,
this endless mass;
And all that lives and grows inside it,
its continuance through all things;
can not be explained or judged or analysed,
It is solely felt and known by those abiding it;

Two souls wading, swimming,
and diving deep;
Discovering its treasures,
and coasting on its surface;
T'wards the shore
where conversation awaits;
It is only and above,
all a journey for you;
And the oceans have no end,
only the means of transportation thereon;

by Jasmine Hiemstra

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from elisha717
Wednesday, May 07, 2008 - 20:48


Sorry about your sis, how are you holding up? I understand the feeling of loosing someone, takes a lot out of you. (May I ask what happend)? Take care!
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