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Dissolution of my defense

from nix - Wednesday, December 19, 2007
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Fucking blurb....

This silence is killing me
Every minute that passes
I fall farther inside me
The second hand pounds out its vigil
Decisive with every pause
Insignificant as I am now
I beg your interest with fear
Hands closed so tightly
Awaiting my swift demise
But agony knocks instead
Betrayals like midnight flames
Belie the stillness of your lips
Yesterday’s forever promises
Like dead leaves fall
Their carcasses blown by insincerity
Words of affection
Drop like lead from your tongue
The callous drone of your voice
Fills an ocean between us
Deep
Blue
Cold
Impassable
Do I step back
Do I walk away
Discard this burden
Step naked into forever

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from vix
Wednesday, December 26, 2007 - 03:09

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Naked into forever...

You have quite the way with words.

I hope 2008 brings you peace and contentment - 'All anguish pain and sadness leave your heart, and let your road be clear'.


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