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from Lithium - Sunday, September 09, 2007
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The product of a midnight glass of wine...

Mouths without eyes
Eyes without mouths
The day hides the shadows
That dance behind me at night
When it is dark and nobody sees them
But me.
And the bogey man.

Cry silently, or they will hear
And smother the voice
From your burning chest.
The chest of dreams locked away
Where colour lives
Music sings
And memories remember

Don’t let them take your chest
Or you’ll forget how to cry,
Forget how to laugh,
Sorrow will follow joy.
When the world spins backwards,
You see people’s backs
And doors without keys shut forever.

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from thatata
Tuesday, September 11, 2007 - 09:44


I liked this line:

Mouths without eyes

Eyes without mouths

Poetry tends to confuse me though, the reason why I liked it might be because I wrote a story, that I wont post on this site, about maddness. One of things I wrote was:

The monuments of kings and queens will eventually crumble to dust. But the mouthless face of Hello Kitty will last forever.

And more egotisticall outpourings:

The grin of the faceless mouth shines through nature.
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