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Just something I'd like to say

from Paradoxic - Thursday, June 14, 2007
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Here I am once again

drinking so I can feel
tearing down my walls
chasing the truth I'd like to run from
and what for?
For you.
It wouldn't be fair for no one to care
for you to be alone, and in pain
to be dead, and forgotten
I can't take off your shoes
and I can't bear it sober
I have to do this
I've tried not to care
but that makes it worse
So here I am once again
and I just wanted you to know
whoever and wherever you are
that you aren't alone
that I'm thinking of you
and I remember you
and I miss you
and I love you
a lot more than I'd like to
I don't know if that helps
but here I am.

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from rainy
Wednesday, July 11, 2007 - 03:25

I'm here too, Dox.
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From vix
Wednesday, July 11, 2007, 07:38


Was wondering when you'd notice it, rainy. I thought you'd probably like it. It says something very poignant to me. I read it when it was first put up but I wasn't commenting at that time. I did write paradoxic an email saying how much I liked it (Hope you got it, dear!). Now i can say it here too. Thanks for drawing my attention to it again.

This is one of the best things you've posted here, P.

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From rainy
Sunday, July 15, 2007, 03:09

The thing I love most about Dox is displayed here. Even when his mind is in pain, even when tranquility eludes him, his heart is big enough to have compassion for others and he finds meaning in reaching out. xxx(reply to this comment
From Paradoxic
Wednesday, July 18, 2007, 08:00


Thank you both so much. I had doubts about putting forth as a poem, because it was motivated by what I had to say, and not the desire to write a poem. I decided to post it because I thought that what I was trying to say might be enough to make up for what it lacked poetically.

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From vix
Wednesday, July 18, 2007, 11:35



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from madly
Sunday, June 17, 2007 - 20:26

I know these words… something I need to tell myself, but have not been able to yet.
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