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Do Not Emerge

from fatuous - Wednesday, March 14, 2007
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Symbolic ophidiophobic ravings?


Sleeping serpent in your egg,
Do not awake, I beg, I beg.
Stay encased, dark and warm,
Know no fear, know no harm.

Hidden terror remain concealed,
Destructive nature unrevealed.
For while contained within that shell,
I am unafraid and well.

But if you merge out of that sphere,
And have free space a serpent t’be.
Poisoning nature dwelling here,

Setting fear at liberty….

Where will sleep my certainty?
Oh do not wake, monstrosity!

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from EAP fan
Thursday, May 24, 2007 - 16:36


Hmm, good prosody.
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from vix
Wednesday, May 23, 2007 - 03:59


I know who you are.

(I think)

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From vix
Wednesday, May 23, 2007, 15:44


Heh I just read that back and realised it sounds faintly creepy. Don't mind me.

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from Kelly
Sunday, May 06, 2007 - 15:51


if you cannot emerge,

then emerge in a changed form.
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from *****
Wednesday, March 21, 2007 - 12:48


This deceptively simple poem was well-made.

It had rhyme and meter and meaning without trying.

I liked how the meter complimented the poems progression and became more stillted as if to mirror the uncertainty.

Post some more.

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From Kelly
Friday, March 23, 2007, 11:51

Yes....more please.(reply to this comment

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