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Tip Top Shape

from June708 - Tuesday, June 27, 2006
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Ah, take a looksie,
Come, come and see
That girl's a woman,
Now she will be

Easier to love with,
A dark desire's dream
Take a look now here,
Peek with me.

Don't be frightened,
Don't be shy,
She can't see you
Won't even try

Hands are shaking
Palms all wet
Who'll be first?
Want to bet?

There she goes,
Slowly still
Dancing darling
Lost the will

Fighting's useless
You're on your own
Until he calls her
Sweetly home

That wasn't so bad
Do you agree?
Want to try?
Try it with me

Raise your hand now
Place it here,
Breathe in my flavor
Drown in the fear

Deeper still,
I'm almost home,
The stillness you pray for
Will never come

Broken darling,
Pretty as rotting wood
I took your wide eyes
And left you with

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from ErikMagnusLehnsher
Saturday, August 12, 2006 - 18:25

Nice. I especially liked the 3 final segments.
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