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Sister of Mine

from Joey - Saturday, January 21, 2006
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This is something I wrote for a sister of the most wonderful woman in the world. Sadly, the sister is still in the family.

Sister of mine
In a world that's so fine
Why do you choose
To be misused?

Sister of mine
Worth the whole gold mine
Why do you feel
You're worth a dime?

Oh sister dear sister
Walk away from the misled
Come closer now closer
Remember tears that we shed

Don't know how else to say it
I just wish you were here
We used to be so close
So far away you choose to stear

What madness is it that keeps
A mind so sweet
From seeing what it is
You're being served up to eat

Please take a moment to see
That it's a twisted reality
Keeping you from noticing
You're surrounded by deceit

Sister of mine
Don't let the song of your life
Be sung with so bitter a chord
It's a madmans dream you follow not the lord.


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from Rain Child
Friday, October 06, 2006 - 06:38

Joey, I appreciate this. I have a left-behind sister too. I would do anything to help her find her own life. But I have a feeling she never will.
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From Joey
Sunday, October 08, 2006, 13:42

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Hope is a funny ol' thing. Sometimes we don't let ourselves feel that we have it in case it gets let down and disappointed. The funny bit is that for some reason it hangs on despite our denial of it's existance.

Your hope is as alive today as it ever was and even though hope is small comfort, don't let it go.

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Sunday, October 08, 2006, 18:48

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From Little Storm
Friday, October 06, 2006, 17:45

I think she already has(reply to this comment

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