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The traffic's song

from Joey - Thursday, January 12, 2006
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Just a little song sending an underlying message to those who've had to dig a little deeper to get by.

Holding it all inside

Am I as deep as the ocean is wide

Got it all locked away

Hopin one day you'll say

That I'll give you all my time

If only you'll be mine And I'll say

That there's no ocean deep enough

To hold the water round my heart

It's true, it's true, it's true

What I'd add to my reply

Is would you like to step inside

And see, and see, and see

That I have something more

Than just a heart that's sore

I have all my weaknesses

Scattered on the front porch in pieces

Because openess implies

I'm in no need of disguise

I'll turn

And take your hand

While the traffic sings it's merry tune

I'm dancin' round the room with you

With you, with you, with you

Lie down

Oh won't you please lie down

In that funny old place

Where darkness has a face

But you turn and look away

Please stay

Won't you lie down and stay

There's more to say

While the traffic sings it's merry tune

Filling the air with noise

All I hear is your voice

Sleeping in my ear

Lie down

Oh won't you please lie down

In that funny old place

Where darkness has a face

But you choose to look away

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from FaFa
Wednesday, January 18, 2006 - 21:41

This song is really beautiful in a strange, sad sort of way. You use words well.
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