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Bucket of Brine

from verylonelygirl - Tuesday, March 08, 2005
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I want to stop crying

Drip drip drop

Little tears of mourning

Find me scorning

Myself dies away

My salty water

Doesn't taste good anymore

Makes me thirsty

And lies to me as I attempt

To quench my thirst

With my bucket of tears

Why can't I take my head out of it?

I've sat with my head

Between my legs

Crying into this bucket

Treasuring each tear

Comforting myself

Wallowing in my loss

Who wants my salty water?

I can't drink anymore of it

Or I will die

Crystallized in the pain of this heart

A memento for always

Of a love gone wrong

And me the mummy

A pillar of salt

As I look back at who

I have left behind me

My bucket of brine

Turn this water to wine

The salt retrieve

So I can believe

Drop drop dead

My shadow is fading

Find me wading

In an ocean of time

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from xolox
Monday, March 14, 2005 - 20:28

bucket of brine... I like that.
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