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Do I?

from Albatross - Monday, February 28, 2005
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September 2004

Do I
When pressed against these bars bend them outwards
And scream against the intolerance of this fame
Of my name
And rushing down the corridors of this life
Of this strife
Move mountain and sea
Building empires of dreams
And like Tamerlane
Stack pillars of skulls
Whitewashed and dry
Victims of this whirlwind?

Do I
When backed into these walls break them down
And fling missiles of wit and fire arrows of charm
And disarm
And rushing through the caverns of this mind
Of this time
Pour out this my fire
And then retire
To my redoubt
Mad not insane
To pitch this hull
Worm-eaten and damp
A victim of this whirlwind?

Do I

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from Haunted
Friday, March 04, 2005 - 21:26

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Yes, you do, you bravely stand up against it all no matter the personal cost...
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From Joe H
Saturday, March 05, 2005, 10:30

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I think it was a rhetorical question.(reply to this comment
From
Tuesday, March 08, 2005, 19:24

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and I think you suck. (reply to this comment
From ErikMagnusLehnsher
Tuesday, March 08, 2005, 19:43

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Ahnold says it best: "Only girlie men blank out their screen names." (reply to this comment
From
Tuesday, March 08, 2005, 19:47

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i'm a girlie girl(reply to this comment
From ErikMagnusLehnsher
Tuesday, March 08, 2005, 20:28

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Ahh...Mon Cheri. For why iz a nice girlie like you in a plaze like theze picking fights avec Joseph. Come to Paree...Let me show you the Eiffel Tower.

Seriously...I'm not trying to stick up for Joe. He can fight his own battles. I'm just saying I object to people tossing grenades from the bushes and then hauling ass back into the shadows. It also doesn't say much for someone's confidence in their argument or their statements.(reply to this comment

From
Tuesday, March 08, 2005, 19:23

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Jesus, Joe H (uni-brow) do you patrol this website all day policing people's comments, correcting their spelling and grammar usage? (reply to this comment
From Joe H
Wednesday, March 09, 2005, 06:57

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Is THAT a rhetorical question? 'Cause I think we all know the answer to that one, don't we?(reply to this comment
From Jerseygirl
Wednesday, March 09, 2005, 10:14

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Every time I'm sure I hate JoeH, he goes and writes a silly little comment such as this one that makes me giggle and love him all over again. Hmmmm ...did i just type that on a public website?? I better stick to my OHR's.(reply to this comment
from Joe H
Tuesday, March 01, 2005 - 09:40

Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5(Agree/Disagree?)
I don't know. Do you?
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From Albatross
Tuesday, March 01, 2005, 13:33

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Speaking of "Do I"...Do I need to plan on giving you a ride down to SD or have you found alternative means of transport?(reply to this comment
From Joe H
Tuesday, March 01, 2005, 14:39

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Yes, I paid the pilot to re-route to San Diego, so you won't need to pick me up.(reply to this comment

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