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The journey of water

from xolox - Wednesday, February 16, 2005
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Please be critical. I was actually trying to rhyme with a rythm.

At the shattering of day

Just as the sun takes her first stab at the skies

Afloat on her way

A cloud like the lid on celestial eyes

One single instant before vision is freed

She causes the colors of morning to bleed

At once a twin, a sister, a stranger

Reflecting the hues of iminent danger

A mile long swell through a wilderness of wet

On currents the cousin of the forest stream

Implodes after an ocean long journey to shore

And dies on the rocks with a homogenous scream

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