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I Doubt Because...............

from Nae-Nae - Thursday, August 12, 2004
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I felt like I was holding my breath for those 19 years & I have finally been able to exhale!

Oh ye of little faith wherefore dost thou doubt?

I doubt because you shout
Your commands and demands
Your angry reprimands

I doubt because Ive seen the back of your hand
To many times
You've lied
Tried to hide
Your intentions
In-between different dimensions
You trap me
Cover my eyes so I cant see
What its like to be free

I doubt and have doubted
Ever since you told me not to feel
Never let me heal
The wounds that you gave me
Are now scars
Like the alignment of the stars
They inevitably help define who we are

I doubt because I can
Not believe in a man
Who loses his mind to this kind of insanity
Who would like the world to think
That were one happy Family

I doubt and I am not alone
Because not all minds are prone
To quiet their questioning thoughts
And believe everything that they are taught

My doubt has been my key
It has enabled me to see
In a new light
A new reality
And I have never felt so free

I doubt and I challenge
The rest of you too
Ask your questions
Clear your perception
Rearrange your view
And then decide
With truly open eyes
What it is
You want to do

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from I like it.
Friday, December 30, 2005 - 16:32

Did you write it to a beat or as spoken word. You make each phrase fit. Very good.
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From Nae-Nae
Sunday, March 26, 2006, 14:27

It was written as spoken word just shortly after I discovered this site. I guess sometimes the words just flow when you feel strongly about something.(reply to this comment

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