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Weaving Anarchy

from a grain of salt - Wednesday, May 05, 2004
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My first post on this site describing personal thoughts. (wrote it when I was still in)

Dexterous hands weaving anarchy

Once intense desires waning into apathy

Going to great lengths to be just who you already are

Yet running from yourself too fast and too far

Hoodwinked by your own procreated deceptions

Lulled into anesthesia by your own ingenious deceptions

So I sympathize with your inborn need to infiltrate

Yes I understand your congenital need to complicate

And we make a team you the psychological sadist

And I the mental masochist

Its over though

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from placebo
Saturday, August 12, 2006 - 08:38

Time to pick on a sibling yet again.You rhymed deception with deception you doofus. That's almost as bad as coffee with café.You should have written "

Hoodwinked by your own procreated deceptions

Lulled into anesthesia by your own ingenious contraceptions"

that would have worked.No need to thank me.
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From Dissonant
Thursday, August 17, 2006, 12:03

Other things that rhyme with “Deception”

Slept in (It’s a stretch, I know)(reply to this comment
From placebo
Thursday, August 17, 2006, 12:10


I walked towards reception

my first inception

resulted in a conception

I should have stayed home and slept in.

Happy?(reply to this comment

From Dissonant
Thursday, August 17, 2006, 12:54

Not "Happy" exactly, more like mildly amused. I was expecting a great deal more from you. I handed VanGogh a brush, paint, and a canvas, and you gave me a stick-figure finger-painting I wouldn't even hang on my fridge. But it is too late now, it will have to do.(reply to this comment
From placebo
Friday, August 18, 2006, 07:02

minimalism is chic again pal...(reply to this comment
From Dissonant
Friday, August 18, 2006, 13:49

It was not only minimalistic, it was anticlimactic.(reply to this comment
From a grain of salt
Sunday, August 13, 2006, 07:51


Ok so I occaisionally have poor rhyming least my poems are cretive unlike your ones which redefine the term banal(reply to this comment

From placebo
Sunday, August 13, 2006, 07:55

What does Crete have to do with anything? I don't write poetry so how could "my ones" be banal?(reply to this comment
From Little Miss Contrary
Saturday, August 12, 2006, 13:13


I totally think that my way is better than yours, placebo:

'Hoodwinked by your own procreated conceptions

Lulled into anesthesia by your own ingenious deceptions'

But really I think the original is just fine and dandy, and I think you should stop picking on your sibs.

I am listening to David Gray just now. I like! Probably because he's so whiny ;-)

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from dan
Thursday, August 10, 2006 - 05:59

Not bad at all.
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from Cultinvator
Thursday, January 27, 2005 - 03:45

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Now that's true oracle words for what we're going right now.

I wish I would have started as early as you did.
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from Poker Star
Thursday, January 20, 2005 - 20:29

Awesome. If you have many more, you should see about getting published.
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from dave
Saturday, May 15, 2004 - 09:43

I like this piece.. well written.
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