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from moon beam - Wednesday, April 28, 2004
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Sometimes I get the feeling that I'm not here at all,

that every face is a reflection in a huge almighty pool.

And when that water is disturbed, by hand or stick or stone,

then all the faces disappear, and I am left alone!

I see all the faces reflected; some look vacant, some obscene,

some with fire in their eyes, a burning disguise,

some like love had never been.

But who are the one's that are reflections?

And who are the one's that are real?

And who, after all is just a mirror to what everyone else wants to feel?

It's easy to be lost in nothing,

you fall till you can't fall anymore

But break out with feelings that break the reflections

and the mirror is smashed to the floor.

So one day I'll empty the water,

I'll shatter the mirror-- you'll see!

Then they'll be no more reflections,

just a simple reality---------ME!

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from Baxter
Thursday, May 27, 2004 - 05:40

Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5(Agree/Disagree?)
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from The Pedantic Punctuator
Monday, May 03, 2004 - 10:40

Average visitor agreement is 1 out of 5(Agree/Disagree?)

I couldn't help but be forced to reflect on your appalling overuse of the apostrophe. When you pluralize a word, you don't need an apostrophe - just an s will do. When is the editor of this section going to start actually editing?

(PS Ok, so I know no one likes having their spelling corrected, but would you rather I critiqued your poetic talent?)
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Monday, May 03, 2004, 18:19

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