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You Abused Me

from LeBrat76 - Friday, November 30, 2001
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Guess What/Who this is about

I tried so hard to be

All that you wanted of me

What the hell did you want me to do?

I'm turning it back on you!

You abused me

You forced what you found on me

And to this day still you don't see

I'm not you and I'll never be

It's my life and I'll always be me

You abused me

With less of me more of him

You tried to replace what I Am

You brainwashed and fucked with my mind

All the while pretending to be so kind

You abused me

I was never good enough as me

It was someone else you were shaping me to be

But in the end you had nothing left

I was gone!--you figure out the rest

You abused me

You crammed all that shit down my throat

But what filled you up inside

Left me empty and starving

You were always putting me down

And now you wonder what's wrong with me?

You abused me

I'm messed up and I'm confused

It's not my fault--You did this to me

Fuck You -- You abused me

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from Shackled
Tuesday, November 09, 2004 - 23:07


Very moving...
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from Christian
Friday, May 07, 2004 - 18:28

hey id like to say the content of the poem was very moving and very true of what happened to a lot of us in TF and i think generally its a good poem. However to be complety honest i feel the poem itself poetic quality isnt that great excuse me if i sound like a jackass just making some critique ok.
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from faeriraven
Monday, December 03, 2001 - 17:31

That hits it right on the spot! Thank you for sharing that with us....very well written.
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from jo
Sunday, December 02, 2001 - 17:27

-I agree with Holon, you're a brilliant writer!
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from Holon
Friday, November 30, 2001 - 10:37

It takes alot to make me cry these days(as I am all cried out).But this brought tears to my eyes.Thank you for sharing this with us.I know how you feel.
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From LeBrat76
Sunday, December 02, 2001, 02:09

Thank you and I'm sorry I made you cry, but it means a lot to me to know that something I wrote has touched someone. I think out of everything I've ever written that best describes my anger and frustration.--I hadn't shared this poem/song with anyone and when I found this site I knew I had to.(reply to this comment
From Holon
Sunday, December 02, 2001, 10:12

I loved both your poems. But I liked this one the best.Sunny writes very good poems too but this one you wrote, I could really relate to.And I think that's why it tuched me so much.I'm sure it's hard to put such raw feelings down on paper,let alone share them with total strangers.But I'm really glad you did.(reply to this comment

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