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Getting Through : Creative Writing

Snow Girl

from dave - Saturday, December 13, 2003
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I wrote this song last night. Recorded it today. Grunge, protest rock... whatever.


I’m walking on part of the brain I’ve got left

I’m standing on the same terrain where you’ve bled

They’ve scoffed and said we’re better off dead

No words can minimize or wars emphasize, we need peace

I’ve heard it’s snowing in Baghdad

They speak of ice storms in Kabul


©Copyright December 2003 by David A. Rugely

Listen to it here: http://www.zerowaitstates.com/noisemaker/noise.html

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from Joe H
Friday, December 26, 2003 - 13:43

(Agree/Disagree?)
In a similar vein:

"What is it? What did you find?
Deep in the reaches of your tiny mind
You see me and hear me, but I'm not really here
'Cause I broke through your lies, now I feel no fear"

Then it goes off into a angry rant about an evil bitch I used to date. I'll spare you the details.
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From banal_commentator
Monday, December 29, 2003, 09:27

(Agree/Disagree?)
Sweet JoeH: so bitter, so angry. (reply to this comment

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