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DAVID IS DAVID IS DAVID IS DAVID IS

from Cultinvator - Tuesday, November 25, 2003
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Mirror spirit why
Impressed reflects burning bush
fearing to be light















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from Cultinvator
Wednesday, December 03, 2003 - 16:15

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You so friendly, I thought I converge to Joe vernacular level of speak.
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from Joe H
Tuesday, December 02, 2003 - 16:40

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God damn it Culti! Now you've got the freaking "David is" song stuck in my head! Touche!
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from Cultinvator
Tuesday, December 02, 2003 - 05:33

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The first thing to creative writing is that you don't attack the person or the meaning value.

Shows how fucking brilliant you are.

Nice work Joeblow.
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From Joe H
Friday, December 05, 2003, 19:51

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What's a "meaning value"?(reply to this comment
from Haiku this
Monday, December 01, 2003 - 19:45

Average visitor agreement is 3 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 3 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 3 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 3 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 3 out of 5(Agree/Disagree?)
Falls the pulpwood tree
Cry tears at a wasted life
Cultinvator writes
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From Cultinvator
Monday, December 01, 2003, 20:38

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I'm sure you're the expert in picking out waste from people you don't even know... Mr. Wastemanager for a life.

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From Haiku this
Tuesday, December 02, 2003, 09:42

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For all your loquaciousness, that's all you could come up with by way of retort? You disappoint me Cultinvator. (reply to this comment
From Cultinvator
Wednesday, December 03, 2003, 15:41

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I thought I wasn't worth your critique, so you weren't worth my retort... quid pro quo. to dissapoint, the first implication is that there might have been an ounce of appreciation, not in the very least a reality with you, you'd have to transform your character beyond recognition. You so damn predictable.(reply to this comment
From Haiku this
Wednesday, December 03, 2003, 16:43

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Haiku this is not Joe H.

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From Joe H
Wednesday, December 03, 2003, 16:08

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"you so damn predictable" Well allow me to stoop to your level of vernacular: You so damn stupid!!(reply to this comment
From Cultinvator
Wednesday, December 03, 2003, 16:22

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It's fun to play with other VERNACULAR circles... that way we don't have to pretend to hold on to an imagined elite reputation. But you're always entertaining with your prickly bickering and 'trying so hard to use jargon' in casual settings. I know, you probably have no control over your impulse, poor boy.

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From Joe H
Wednesday, December 03, 2003, 17:42

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Well depending on how you define "elite," I don't know if we're just imagining ourselves that way. But what's this about me "trying to use jargon." Do you mean big words?, cause if anything you're more guilty of using big words just for fun. I like to use whatever word I feel is most precise, after all, that's why the English language has so many.(reply to this comment
From Cultinvator
Wednesday, December 03, 2003, 16:10

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Wow, how subtle... I'm offended. (reply to this comment

from Joe H
Monday, December 01, 2003 - 19:12

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I think it's just like Cultinvator to post his crappy little haiku in an article all by itself in another shameless attempt to draw attention to himself. Well, I hope my 2 cents here are a taste of what's to come and the only attention you get is criticism, no wait, make that ridicule, criticism is too good for you.
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From Cultinvator
Monday, December 01, 2003, 20:30

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In everything you write transcends some ironic truth in spite of your intent.

don't waste your critic pious breath if ridicule is what you hold in abundance.

As for shame, that's never been my forte.

Like my my sexual ed professor used to say:

Shame is better left to sexual fetish and bodily functions.

As for writing, I'll take the A+ from my teacher a bit more seriously than your egotistical assertions. Thanks for reading anyhow, no better flattery than to have the sounds of my breath mimic with eco in the halls of contentious minds..lol!

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From neez
Tuesday, December 02, 2003, 18:34

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You hear that large echo in here too?(reply to this comment
From Cultinvator
Tuesday, December 02, 2003, 18:53

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Ecco away.... (reply to this comment
From neez
Wednesday, December 03, 2003, 02:17

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Do you misspell words on purpose in an attempt to enhance your 'beautiful unique flower-ness'?(reply to this comment

From Cultinvator
Wednesday, December 03, 2003, 16:24

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No I do that to waste your time and that of Joe. (reply to this comment
From Cultinvator
Wednesday, December 03, 2003, 16:27

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That way I can project recognizable ideas, not have to worry about being anal and overly structured and since it takes me the same amount of time to write a slight deviance in word format to its original form it keeps my writing entertained by casual nitpickers who might present a remote criticism that might improve the quality of the content in more ways than one.

Much like upside down sighns by the highway... or maybe I just haven't had the time to proofread it... writing is always on ongoing thing you know? It can never be finished.(reply to this comment

From neez
Thursday, December 04, 2003, 05:10

Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5(
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Are there many of these upside down highways signs you speak of? Or was that an art project of yours?(reply to this comment
From Cultinvator
Wednesday, December 10, 2003, 20:46

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Mostly advertisements for products and services, but upside down traffic signs might make an interesting art project? So who is haiku this... whas it a haiku about the title or the haiku?(reply to this comment
From neez
Sunday, December 21, 2003, 04:40

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Are you speaking in riddles again?

Then how many upside down signs does one see b4 they'll start ignoring them all together?(reply to this comment

From Cultinvator
Thursday, December 04, 2003, 07:30

Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5(Agree/Disagree?)

Confirming that.... Unusual is noticed more than that which is in large supply 'conforming to strict form'.

I used to be really anal about making sure I don't put my drafts up, but after seeing how half the site functions with Joe H being a sissy about spelling, it's more entertaining to watch him burn.

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From Joe H
Friday, December 05, 2003, 19:51

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The only thing burning is your urethra when you pee. Go see the doctor and get some penicillin. Cheers!(reply to this comment
From neez
Friday, December 05, 2003, 16:52

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You spelt the last 2 paragraphs so well(I can sleep easy tonight), that I'm going to agree with you.. lol(reply to this comment

From Cultinvator
Sunday, December 21, 2003, 15:00

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Happy Hollidays!(reply to this comment

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