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forfeit

from Dani - Friday, August 08, 2003
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You’re gone from my heart
Please leave my life
The game of the fool’s lies
Leaves me tonight

Wisdom is such a cheap element
Of what is right

Play the game
Pawns move along
I forfeit your board the same way
You did your life

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from Alf
Monday, August 25, 2003 - 09:36

Average visitor agreement is 3 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 3 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 3 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 3 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 3 out of 5(Agree/Disagree?)
three words. ''shower'', ''of'', ''shit''.
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from dave
Sunday, August 24, 2003 - 14:09

Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5(Agree/Disagree?)
Nice Dani. "I forfeit your board the same way you did your life.." beautifully written.
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From Dani
Wednesday, August 27, 2003, 18:09

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