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In The Land of The Chaitlings

from Beets - Monday, July 14, 2003
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Yes, I know its not english, but hey, who needs language anyway? ;)


One day as I walked through the hands of time,


I began to think without my mind.


I thought of all I could not of,


Until my mind was maldrenoved.


I've lived a thousand lives,


and never died a death.


But still the Chaitlings sang their twills,


Without slight controlef.


Through the hands of time I walked,


And still I found no legs.


Perhaps they've been stolen by the evil carbonzeds.


I think I'll never know,


Or perhaps I already do.


For maybe it was I who stole them,


Or maybe it was you.

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from EyesWideShut
Friday, July 18, 2003 - 10:48

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Quaz! I really klork it! I think the legless part is a bit graphicious for my liking though. You might have considered losing a brint or maybe even your clackens, but legs??? Think of all the mought everywhere. Yuck! Or as they say these days--Florg!

I'm mastroverted to give this style a shot now myself. Sounds like great ploot!

Your poem is unusually intorvent. Good job and good craakensave next time.

Insiptaniously,

Sunny
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from Jules
Thursday, July 17, 2003 - 09:52

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Beets, don't worry about smoking up. Mom and Dad both did a lot too at your age, and they turned out just fine, right?
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From Beets
Thursday, July 17, 2003, 18:39

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Jules, I am Deeply conterated at your accusation of my ferentine usage of mind maldrenoving substances. It really wapitizes my heart to know that you would sasporate such a low kallass of me. I believe that the only way that you could ever bosonise me for this great mounteriss would be a cash payment of $500 and a full and sincere natoriousis.

Indebeintly Sarita(reply to this comment

From Jules
Friday, July 18, 2003, 09:32

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Oh boy, if you turn into Cultinvator/Alf (not that there's anything wrong with that) I will be heartbroken. :'(

See you soon, you crazy kid. :) (reply to this comment

From Beets
Friday, July 18, 2003, 13:28

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where's my notoriousis?(reply to this comment
From Jules
Friday, July 18, 2003, 14:43

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You are already very notorious. (reply to this comment
From Beets
Thursday, July 17, 2003, 18:38

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Jules, I am Deeply conterated at your accusation of my ferentine usage of mind maldrenoving substances. It really wapitizes my heart to know that you would sasporate such a low kallass of me. I believe that the only way that you could ever bosonise me for this great mounteriss would be a cash payment of $500 and a full and sincere natoriousis.

Indebeintly Sarita(reply to this comment

from Tim R
Thursday, July 17, 2003 - 01:43

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This new language of yours is pretty cool, or better yet, 'Twas brillig. ;-)
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