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Mirror

from Bootylicious - Thursday, July 10, 2003
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Mirror


Itís a damn bitter taste
Of coffee overcooked
Itís a damn rotten waste
A beauty overlooked

Unnaturally real
The TV and its sound
Sporadically me
I throw my novel down

Mirror on the wall
Answer me in truth
Mirror on the wall
Tell me what to do
If my escape
Were to fail
Should my freedom
Skip bail


Itís a messy double bed
With misery asleep
Itís a stressy tired head
That hides beneath the sheet

A cold and empty room
Of memories passť
A dark and solid gloom
Thatís settled on my day

Mirror on the wall
It screams at me in tears
Mirror on the wall
Itís silence rips my ears
With a shout and a call
Am I hearing at all?


Itís a cruel and gripping pain
Thatís stuck inside my guts
Itís a fooled and empty drain
Thatís driving me all nuts

Intentionally fake,
Allegedly aware.
This bed I did not make
This dream I didnít share

Mirror on the wall
It tells me who I am
Mirror on the wall
My lifeís a single scam
Itís a fairy-tale lie
My heartís breaking inside

Mirror on the wall
It sees my bags are packed,
Sees I heard the call
Am finding what I lacked

Now Iím closing the door
It wonít see me no more



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from Joey
Monday, February 06, 2006 - 14:36

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This is awesome! Beautiful flow, clear message, victorious ending. You got it all in there sis
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