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Getting Through : Creative Writing
Crush--Please Clarify | from LeBrat76 - Saturday, February 01, 2003
accessed 1308 times Dumb little poem I wrote 'cause I had nothing better to do. I don't know what
You mean by that
Why did you say
That I could stay
I like you
What should I do
You spoke of her
Making my mind blur
You lead me down
You lead me around
One moment it's me
The next it's she
Your signals mixed
My attraction fixed
To me, one you
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Reader's comments on this article Add a new comment on this article |  from Cultinvator
Tuesday, December 02, 2003 - 16:14
(Agree/Disagree?)
If it's dumb then why should we read it? I hate selfvilification, if you can't have respect for yourself how can you expect it from us?
No offence intended... I just hate this 'volunteer humility' coating art.
I think your work is superb!
I've seen Jules do that to run from ridicule... To me it's simple, there is what you are, and what you're not and abstracts of good and bad have nothing to do with it.
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