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Getting On : Lovers

You tought me well.

from MM - Monday, February 14, 2005
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from a sentimal soul...
Tuesday, June 07, 2005 - 20:02

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I thought it was sweet its not every day that I can read a heartbreaking poem like that....
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From xolox
Wednesday, June 08, 2005, 08:36

You should pick up a book with horrendous, sappy poetry. Then you CAN read it everyday.(reply to this comment
From why, oh why
Wednesday, June 08, 2005, 10:50


lol...too true. I am wondering why such a lame thread has been given new, unncecessary life though.(reply to this comment

From xolox
Wednesday, June 08, 2005, 12:15

Whatever new life it has been given is more like a death twitch than an all out sprint.(reply to this comment
from neez
Wednesday, February 16, 2005 - 17:54


(Date last made love to her, 2003-16th January) date we broke up, 2002-12-08....Silly poem posted on January 2005.

You must write slowly.
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from exister
Wednesday, February 16, 2005 - 15:15


The modern woman certainly can't resist a man who croons here with some Smokey Robinson lyrics.

Are you like 19 or something?
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From Joe H
Wednesday, February 16, 2005, 18:15


Here's a better song for her:
Caroline (par MC Solaar)

J'etais cool, assis sur un banc, c'etait le printemps
Ils cueillent une marguerite, ce sont deux amants
Overdose de douceur, ils jouent comme des enfants
Je t'aime un peu, beaucoup, a la folie, passionnement
Mais a la suite d'une douloureuse deception sentimentale
D'humeur chaleureuse je devenais brutal
La haine d'un etre n'est pas dans nos prerogatives
Tchernobyl, tcherno-debile! Jalousie radio-active
Caroline etait une amie, une superbe fille
Je repense a elle, a nous, a nos cornets vanille
A sa boulimie de fraises, de framboises, de myrtilles
A ses delires futiles, a son style pacotille

Je suis l'as de trefle qui pique ton coeur, Caro-Line

Comme le trefle a quatre feuilles, je cherche votre bonheur
Je suis l'homme qui tombe a pic, pour prendre ton coeur
Il faut se tenir a carreau, Caro ce message vient du coeur

Une pyramide de baisers, une tempete d'amitie
Une vague de caresse, un cyclone de douceur
Un ocean de pensees, Caroline je t'ai offert un building de tendresse
J'ai une peur bleue, je suis poursuivi par l'armee rouge
Pour toi j'ai pris des billets verts, il a fallu qu'je bouge
Pyromane de ton coeur, canadair de tes frayeurs
Je t'ai offert une symphonie de couleurs

Elle est partie, maso
Avec un vieux macho
Qu'elle avait rencontre dans une station de metro
Quand je les vois main dans la main fumant le meme megot
Je sens un pincement dans son coeur, mais elle n'ose dire mot

Je suis l'as de trefle qui pique ton coeur, Caro-Line

Claude MC prend le microphone genre love story ragga muffin
Pour te parler d'une amie qu'on appelle Caroline
Elle etait ma dame, elle etait ma came
Elle etait ma vitamine
Elle etait ma drogue, ma dope, ma coke, mon crack
Mon amphetamine, Caroline
Je repense a elle, femme actuelle, 20 ans, jeune et jolie
Remets donc le film a l'envers, magneto de la vie
Pour elle, faut-il l'admettre, des larmes ont coule
Hemorragie occulaire, vive notre amitie
Du passe, du present, je l'espere du futur
Je suis passe pour etre present dans ton futur
La vie est un jeu de cartes
Paris un casino
Je joue les rouges ... coeur, Caro

Anyone care to proffer an interpretation to these "strong tongues"?
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From Vicky
Wednesday, February 16, 2005, 16:22


I think you're being unnecessarily critical here. I doubt that this is an attempt at 'winning her back'. Seems to me it's an expression of hurt and longing. And, yes, romantic lyrics are a bit of a cliche, but I happen to think this song is a very expression of agony of lost love. I think that being tender and honest in one's suffering is rather endearing, and I think you're nasty to pick on someone who's obviously suffering.

But that's just my opinion, and I'm the world's biggest sucker for an intensely tortured soul... ; )(reply to this comment

From Vicky
Wednesday, February 16, 2005, 16:28


*...I happen to think this song is a very touching expression of the agony of lost love.'

Damn, I need to get myself to bed, I guess.(reply to this comment

from Joe H
Wednesday, February 16, 2005 - 13:56


Publicly announcing that you had post-breakup sex is sure to win her back, buddy! And who the hell calls it "making love"? Are you still in the cult or something?

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From Jana
Tuesday, June 07, 2005, 11:09


Hey come on guys.. maybe the poem is a bit cliche.. but this guy seems sincere. I know what its like to lose the one you love and know you'll never get him back... so lay off the poor fella. (reply to this comment

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