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from not again Wednesday, January 05, 2005 - 14:56 (Agree/Disagree?) "matchstick men hanging on a wish to die" now that's definitely mine! hmm.. not cool. (reply to this comment)

from Hanna_Black Friday, October 25, 2002 - 14:52 (Agree/Disagree?) hey, that is real good. sorta sounds like some of the stuff I write. Hee hee! I like the matchstick men part. (reply to this comment)

from sarafina Thursday, October 24, 2002 - 19:56 (Agree/Disagree?) Oh God girl, That was Awesome! I can't even begin tell you how many times I've felt that way and for the very same reasons you wrote this. I just want to give up sometime, life and love are both just a constant battle and stuggle and sometimes you just get tired of trying. (reply to this comment)

from JoeH Wednesday, October 23, 2002 - 15:43 (Agree/Disagree?) this is pretty good, I like the rhythm - the way you cram lots of words (and meaning) into each line. The choppiness wasn't too bad either, it was just a matter of reading it correctly, you know, emphasizing the right syllables. Good stuff! (reply to this comment)

from Jerseygirl Wednesday, October 23, 2002 - 07:05 (Agree/Disagree?) Faeri,this is a great piece. "we take on this charade so we can be understood" - damn correct observation! Words of encouragement are moot and cannot come from a person such as myself but I wish you all the best. (reply to this comment)