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    Getting Through : Creative Writing

    Destructive

    from Albatross - Thursday, August 08, 2002
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    A simple poem

    Ah…What a beast have I become
    A beast
    A beast
    A lovely one
    A fool with poison on my tongue

    Destructive

    A heap of all the books I’ve read
    My books
    My books
    My sexual bed
    With ceiling fans beating overhead

    Destructive

    And coursing through the telephone wires
    My words
    My words
    A raging fire
    Proving all other poets liars

    Destructive

    So many little wooden gods
    They watch
    They watch
    With solemn nods
    And how I envy these golden rods

    Destructive


    Now shake and shiver with every glance
    A cynic
    A cynic
    Of this romance
    A believer when striped of shirt and pants

    Destructive

    So twist and squirm upon your floor
    The beast
    The beast
    Is at your door
    And you his master, lover, whore

    Destructive.

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    from EyesWideShut
    Monday, June 16, 2003 - 20:04
    (Agree/Disagree?)

    Very nice, indeed. I love the ceiling fan line. Totally visual.


    You write???


    (reply to this comment)
    From mex
    Tuesday, June 17, 2003, 19:48
    (Agree/Disagree?)

    NO. He is an artist, that is why he drew his post.

    (reply to this comment) 
    from Anthony
    Friday, August 09, 2002 - 14:20
    (Agree/Disagree?)
    Well, I know what I'm going to hear when I come over...
    (reply to this comment)
    From EyesWideShut
    Friday, June 20, 2003, 13:23
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    Don't get it, Ant.(reply to this comment) 

    from Someone
    Thursday, August 08, 2002 - 20:31
    (Agree/Disagree?)
    Ah, it’s nice to see that there are still men around can remain in touch with their ‘feminine side’ (without over nurturing it).
    Nothing wrong with a poisoned tongued fool, my advice: turn off the ceiling fan, stop the coursing, stay a cynic but give in to the beast!!

    (reply to this comment)
    from JoeH
    Thursday, August 08, 2002 - 19:13
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    That was brilliant Dan! just one question: Did you mean "striPPed of shirt and pants" are you just really into pinstripes? I liked your polkadot tears song.
    (reply to this comment)
    From Albatross
    Thursday, August 08, 2002, 19:38
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    Yeah..thanks joe....I discovered my error once it was sent...I should proof it better. And will I ever live down that polkadot thing? And was it me?...I don't remember...one could be forgiven for thinking I have a fetish for fabric patterns.

    Daniel(reply to this comment) 
    From cm
    Friday, August 09, 2002, 01:44
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    Dan, Yes "Polka Dot" was you indeed. I like this one however. I myself have a thing for pinstripe. I understand your fetish.

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