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HAMMER REVELATION

from JudasChrist - Tuesday, August 06, 2002
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A MASTER PIECE SONG.

A depiction of the lamb, the lion, deplorably portrayed
The beast, the dragon, as in shadowy imagery,
have the power to take away peace on earth
The threshold's here as the sun turns black,
the moon red like blood and stars falling down
Babylon falling, the last of the antagonistic battles,
The madman chained for a thousand of years
Use your eyes and you will see it, bright and shining
A moment of your time,
a glimpse of your (brave) new world

Your revelation, in apocalyptic terms,
the hammer, separating fiction from reality
Embrace the notion, embrace the moment
Who are the ones to tell the truth, who are
the ones to tell what to believe?
The depiction is therefore all you've got

The hammer is mine, the revelation is yours
Am I God or am I the Devil?
It's a comprehensible, yet complex, reality,
because it means that when the past has caught
up with the present, we have no future.



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from Cultinvator
Tuesday, December 02, 2003 - 16:10

(Agree/Disagree?)
I like the last part, and the hammer. I'd work a bit on the sound of it earlier it sounds a bit clashy, but maybe you intended it to be that way?
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