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from heir c Monday, November 17, 2008 - 22:31 (Agree/Disagree?) would you like to argue with me colden?........i come in peace you other people.....this site needs healing here i am......colden......i can say your whole poem in one line......"your demons are in your own head, my son"........what a great enlightenment point....hahahahha.....how wud you dress up such a mediocre thought as poetry? with a bunch of lines and shit? (reply to this comment)

From colden Tuesday, November 18, 2008, 09:00 (Agree/Disagree?) I will gladly concede you have grasped the thrust of the poem, mediocre it may be. Though it was a revelation to me at one point. I still prefere mine to your one liner version though.To me poetry is a little like sex in that quicker is not always better;-)(reply to this comment)

From cheeks Friday, November 21, 2008, 11:47 (Agree/Disagree?) To me a bad quick fuck, is much better than a long bad fuck.(reply to this comment)

From colden Friday, November 21, 2008, 17:55 (Agree/Disagree?) so your always this much fun :P(reply to this comment)

From heir c Tuesday, November 18, 2008, 18:06 (Agree/Disagree?) ;-) ok.......a long boring "get off me" session is not better colden.........and also i have not "grasped the thrust" of anything......hahaha(reply to this comment)

From colden Wednesday, November 19, 2008, 12:49 (Agree/Disagree?)  On a scale of 1 to 10, 1 being your average sunday morning go arround and 10 being the most depraved mind fuck we can come up with, not to be immodest we'll call this a six. Though it seems to have warped a fragile little mind (or two)(reply to this comment)

From Hot blonde chick Tuesday, November 18, 2008, 18:55 (Agree/Disagree?) heir c: Hey, baby, you want to go upstairs and do some horizontal tango? Hot blonde chick: Get off me!(reply to this comment)

From heir c Tuesday, November 18, 2008, 20:20 (Agree/Disagree?) haha nice one nerd(reply to this comment)

from colden Monday, November 17, 2008 - 21:08 (Agree/Disagree?) I'm going to tell you a story about a boy we'll call him "scarface". He should have been a man by now but he's only a boy. He dosn't like to argue though he really likes to shout! he wrote what a fellow member aptly called a "Berg worthy rant" in all my politics, for which he was soundly spanked by yours truly. rather than legitimately defend(HA!) or am mend his ideas he tryed to cover the whole thing with a self congradulatory comment from some "secreat admirer" that is actualy longer than his origanal work in some desprate attempt to burry his shame. I took pity on so fragile an ego and let that familyrific bit of misdirection slide, content to diflect his sporadic jabs at my poetry. He has now taken on a new persona the "apostate admirer". I see you verry well smallface! (reply to this comment)

From Samuel Tuesday, November 18, 2008, 17:09 (Agree/Disagree?) Looks like someone has paid a tribute to scarface. http://www.thesmokinggun.com/archive/years/2008/1118081dal1.html(reply to this comment)

from apostate admirer Monday, November 17, 2008 - 09:41 (Agree/Disagree?) I could easily argue that this poem is about you being a child molesting pedophile, unless you and your son are both euphemisms for your latent inner child, in which case, you have some fucking issues (reply to this comment)

From colden Monday, November 17, 2008, 15:12 (Agree/Disagree?)  Do you want to argue that? do you see only two options? (reply to this comment)

from heir c Saturday, November 15, 2008 - 19:57 (Agree/Disagree?) you are no poet colden........i am......i do not like it in the boat, i do not like it in the moat.. (reply to this comment)

From colden Saturday, November 15, 2008, 22:45 (Agree/Disagree?) encore!(reply to this comment)

from scarface Saturday, November 08, 2008 - 18:46 (Agree/Disagree?) How comforting. Now I remember why I abhor poetry. (reply to this comment)

From colden Sunday, November 09, 2008, 17:41 (Agree/Disagree?) abhor -(verb) to shrink back from, shudder at, detset utterly, abominate. If you seek comfort in anger I'm glad you found it here and for future refernce yes, you can always find poetry in the poetry section ;-P(reply to this comment)

From scarface Monday, November 10, 2008, 20:30 (Agree/Disagree?) I knew there was a reason my toilet excrement looks exceedingly more pleasant then your poetry. :)(reply to this comment)

From colden Wednesday, November 12, 2008, 20:49 (Agree/Disagree?) Like to like play where you will.(reply to this comment)

From scarface Saturday, November 15, 2008, 13:40 (Agree/Disagree?) yawn. you got me but im sure you could fine something better to do with your time. What do you have to gain from making survivors relive there worst moments. Seriously get a life.(reply to this comment)

From colden Saturday, November 15, 2008, 22:57 (Agree/Disagree?)  I like to let poems speak for themselves, however if I have offended you through your interpertation I appologise. That was not my intent, It is based in personal experience (which we may share) and in how I devloped protective mechanisms that once out were far more than I required and put a fear in those arround me that was ironicly familiar Oh and for the record I don't find you a waste of time;-)(reply to this comment)