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    Getting Through : Creative Writing

    Why?

    from madly - Friday, December 07, 2007
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    I know a child could have written this and it was the lost child in me that did. When I listened to the song below, all the feelings I had for my mother came to life and the little girl in me wanted an answer, an answer that was never given to me. I loved my mother and I would have done anything, when I was young, to get her to see me and love me, even a little.


    Tell me, I am asking
    Questions
    Can you explain?
    Why?


    Look at me, I am seeing
    I remember
    You forgot
    Why?

    Hear me, I am crying
    Heart broken
    Tears
    Why?

    Touch me, I am real
    Breath, life
    From you, me
    Why?

    Catch me, I am falling
    Don’t leave
    Wait
    Why?

    Heal me, I am dying
    Can't you?
    Please
    Why?

    Love me, I am hurting
    Lie
    I beg you
    Why?

    Mother, I am your daughter
    Never loved
    Forgotten
    Why?

    http://youtube.com/watch?v=y0Ds6joW5RM



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    from celestej
    Saturday, October 04, 2008 - 03:49
    Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5(Agree/Disagree?)
    I love your poem madly.  It made me cry- and then I listened to that song, which I've heard a million times before, in a whole new way.  My parents have apologized to me many times.  It's too godamned late.  The damage has been done.
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    from Kelly
    Wednesday, December 19, 2007 - 18:51
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    from conan
    Saturday, December 08, 2007 - 11:03
    Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5Average visitor agreement is 5 out of 5(Agree/Disagree?)
    That song was very poignant. I can see why you liked it and also why it wrenched at your heart. The images as much as the lyrics.

    As for your 'child's poem', while the rhyme scheme may not be iambic, it's simple, honest, and beautiful in it's own way. I liked this.

    P.S. Parents in general suck, though I'm sure you know that already
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