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Getting Through : Creative Writing
Skin | from slash - Thursday, July 19, 2007 accessed 557 times Another bad poem Your under, inside, all over me Like a permanent itching Inside my skin Its torture being So close I can feel Your breath within All over my skin |
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Reader's comments on this article Add a new comment on this article | from good enough to make me itchy Friday, July 27, 2007 - 14:40 (Agree/Disagree?) Skin, I can’t really give you any constructive criticism cause I’m not really sure how to write myself....(sometimes, people get the exact opposite of what I am trying to say through writing..) I kinda liked your poem; it reminded me of some I wrote awhile back .....hope you don’t mind me posting them. ---K’ish Picking at my itchy scab innocently Knowing full well I will leave a scar So I leave it hanging— --torture Impatient!—Click- Click End Program-Click Again! How is the window…still open? --Re booting Suffering Padlocked box--clock Tick tock-- chicken pox’s Mocks-- my broken heat (reply to this comment)
| | | From because...... Sunday, July 29, 2007, 05:13 (Agree/Disagree?) I did post my name....only it keeps changing.... WTF??—giggle.... besides, Slash doesn’t seem to mind....and you posted crap on Slash’s article too—I bet your cheeks are rosy red now that I pinched them—you look soooo adorable -- esp. since, I’m almost sure you don’t always go by “cheeks” --but yeah, I know, I can’t hate you for being pretty. ;-P (reply to this comment) |
| | From cheeks Sunday, July 29, 2007, 20:43 (Agree/Disagree?) Freaking moron I didn't post crap poetry on his article. It's like adding a comment to an article with another article. It's rude. I have gone by Cheeks on this site for years now and most people here know who I am by now, at least they know I am in my mean stage. So if you have a problem with MPD perhaps you should take medication. (reply to this comment) |
| | | | | | | | | | | | | | from cheeks Friday, July 27, 2007 - 11:47 (Agree/Disagree?) If you knew it was bad why did you post it? (reply to this comment)
| | | from bad peom good enough to make me itchy again Wednesday, July 25, 2007 - 14:59 (Agree/Disagree?) I felt like that.... alittle over a month ago--it was torture! (reply to this comment)
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