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Getting Through : Creative Writing
Paramnesia | from a grain of salt - Sunday, August 13, 2006 accessed 996 times just a quick rant typed this up in like 10 minutes Gypsy fingers roam Across flesh on fire Naked not alone Erotica binds desire And as a gaze beyond tangerine skies Outshining even my reflection in your iridescent eyes I catch my heart in my throat And pause to remove my lenses of ozone blue As what feels like death I note Is merely deja-vu |
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Reader's comments on this article Add a new comment on this article | from mia1 Wednesday, September 06, 2006 - 22:50 (Agree/Disagree?) gypsies are creepy!!! If I had a gypsys roaming fingers on me I would have to seriously hospitalize myself and check for VD!! as for the rest I'm sure I read it but don't recall much as the gypsies are doing a dance in my head....Dm Am or was it the other way around...aaahhhhhhh!!!!!!!! (reply to this comment)
| from placebo Thursday, August 24, 2006 - 06:50 (Agree/Disagree?) Erotica is a noun not an adjective. "Little sister can't you find another way................." (reply to this comment)
| | | | | | | from hmmmmm.... Saturday, August 19, 2006 - 13:33 (Agree/Disagree?)
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| | | | | | | | | | | | | From Dissonant Wednesday, August 23, 2006, 12:51 (Agree/Disagree?) "Hmmmm", "Mmmmm", both are acceptable, as are "Just like that baby", "faster", "Slower", etc.. That is all, run along.(reply to this comment) |
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