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Getting Through : Creative Writing
If I Should Die... | from Mercy - Wednesday, November 16, 2005
accessed 1106 times IF I SHOULD DIE... To all the boys who slyly kissed me
To all the girls who highly dissed me
Adios to you, adios to you
To all the men who bailed and left me
To all of them who failed to suit me
Adieu to you, adieu to you
To the mother who was a friend to me
To the father who was a fiend to me
Sayonara to you, sayonara to you
To the brother who was a stranger to me
To the strangers who were fair to me
Farewell to you, farewell to you
To the friends who were always there for me
To the lover who cared till the end for me
Au revoir to you, Au revoir to you |
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Reader's comments on this article Add a new comment on this article |  from cheeks
Thursday, May 03, 2007 - 16:27
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Now this is poetry. It is both beautiful and heartbreaking. It reminds us of what is and was important to us in our lives. It is not a bunch of random sentences piled on top of each other with no rhyme or reason. Here is wishing you the best in your struggle with life. May you find peace here with us and not look for it elsewhere.
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| from A jerk
Monday, January 02, 2006 - 09:19
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This is the kind of suicide note that leaves you thinking "Good riddance!"
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| | | | from Joey
Friday, December 30, 2005 - 23:30
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There aren't always enough words at our command to explain how something makes us feel when we read, see, and experience it.
There's rarely a clear enough reaction to even put words to. So I won't try.
I just hope it will be a very long time before we're saying goodbye to you.
Joey
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| from Anthony
Tuesday, November 29, 2005 - 17:06
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Sorry I wansn't too talkative last time you tried chatting with me on MSN. I hope you're doing well dear.
Regards,
Anthony
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