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from placebo Saturday, August 12, 2006 - 08:38 (Agree/Disagree?) Time to pick on a sibling yet again.You rhymed deception with deception you doofus. That's almost as bad as coffee with café.You should have written " Hoodwinked by your own procreated deceptions Lulled into anesthesia by your own ingenious contraceptions" that would have worked.No need to thank me. (reply to this comment)

From Dissonant Thursday, August 17, 2006, 12:03 (Agree/Disagree?) Other things that rhyme with “Deception” Reception Conception Inception Slept in (It’s a stretch, I know)(reply to this comment)

From placebo Thursday, August 17, 2006, 12:10 (Agree/Disagree?) I walked towards reception my first inception resulted in a conception I should have stayed home and slept in. Happy?(reply to this comment)

From Dissonant Thursday, August 17, 2006, 12:54 (Agree/Disagree?) Not "Happy" exactly, more like mildly amused. I was expecting a great deal more from you. I handed VanGogh a brush, paint, and a canvas, and you gave me a stick-figure finger-painting I wouldn't even hang on my fridge. But it is too late now, it will have to do.(reply to this comment)

From placebo Friday, August 18, 2006, 07:02 (Agree/Disagree?) minimalism is chic again pal...(reply to this comment)

From Dissonant Friday, August 18, 2006, 13:49 (Agree/Disagree?) It was not only minimalistic, it was anticlimactic.(reply to this comment)

From a grain of salt Sunday, August 13, 2006, 07:51 (Agree/Disagree?) Ok so I occaisionally have poor rhyming sequences...at least my poems are cretive unlike your ones which redefine the term banal(reply to this comment)

From placebo Sunday, August 13, 2006, 07:55 (Agree/Disagree?) What does Crete have to do with anything? I don't write poetry so how could "my ones" be banal?(reply to this comment)

From Little Miss Contrary Saturday, August 12, 2006, 13:13 (Agree/Disagree?) I totally think that my way is better than yours, placebo: 'Hoodwinked by your own procreated conceptions Lulled into anesthesia by your own ingenious deceptions' But really I think the original is just fine and dandy, and I think you should stop picking on your sibs. I am listening to David Gray just now. I like! Probably because he's so whiny ;-) (reply to this comment)

from dan Thursday, August 10, 2006 - 05:59 (Agree/Disagree?) Not bad at all. (reply to this comment)

from Cultinvator Thursday, January 27, 2005 - 03:45 (Agree/Disagree?) Now that's true oracle words for what we're going right now. I wish I would have started as early as you did. (reply to this comment)

from Poker Star Thursday, January 20, 2005 - 20:29 (Agree/Disagree?) Awesome. If you have many more, you should see about getting published. (reply to this comment)

from dave Saturday, May 15, 2004 - 09:43 (Agree/Disagree?) I like this piece.. well written. (reply to this comment)