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Getting Through : Creative Writing
You Abused Me | from LeBrat76 - Friday, November 30, 2001
accessed 1590 times Guess What/Who this is about I tried so hard to be
All that you wanted of me
What the hell did you want me to do?
I'm turning it back on you!
You abused me
You forced what you found on me
And to this day still you don't see
I'm not you and I'll never be
It's my life and I'll always be me
You abused me
With less of me more of him
You tried to replace what I Am
You brainwashed and fucked with my mind
All the while pretending to be so kind
You abused me
I was never good enough as me
It was someone else you were shaping me to be
But in the end you had nothing left
I was gone!--you figure out the rest
You abused me
You crammed all that shit down my throat
But what filled you up inside
Left me empty and starving
You were always putting me down
And now you wonder what's wrong with me?
You abused me
I'm messed up and I'm confused
It's not my fault--You did this to me
Fuck You -- You abused me
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Reader's comments on this article Add a new comment on this article |  from Shackled
Tuesday, November 09, 2004 - 23:07
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Very moving...
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| from Christian
Friday, May 07, 2004 - 18:28
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hey id like to say the content of the poem was very moving and very true of what happened to a lot of us in TF and i think generally its a good poem. However to be complety honest i feel the poem itself poetic quality isnt that great excuse me if i sound like a jackass just making some critique ok.
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| from faeriraven
Monday, December 03, 2001 - 17:31
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That hits it right on the spot! Thank you for sharing that with us....very well written.
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| from jo
Sunday, December 02, 2001 - 17:27
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-I agree with Holon, you're a brilliant writer!
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| from Holon
Friday, November 30, 2001 - 10:37
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It takes alot to make me cry these days(as I am all cried out).But this brought tears to my eyes.Thank you for sharing this with us.I know how you feel.
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