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Getting Through : Creative Writing
The Green Mile | from Mika - Tuesday, December 17, 2002
accessed 1225 times It's kinda old, but I wrote this poem after I read "The Green Mile" (Stephen King). If you haven't read the series, you probably won't understand this. I saw the pain and started crying
I felt your tears when you were dying
I said I'd never come undone
From start of day 'til set of sun
Your hands are big, I am not lying
Only one thing guilty of, that was trying
To put together a broken thing
To help two silenced girls to sing
I see the hurt and want to help you
Thoughts you have many, words few
You're strapped into the electric chair
Moments ago, you were knelt in prayer
I've felt the healing your hands can do
Now I bind up those hands, right on cue
A single tear drops from your eyes
I know you're safe in Paradise
7/13/97
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Reader's comments on this article Add a new comment on this article |  from Bootylicious
Wednesday, December 18, 2002 - 13:04
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I liked that. I just read "the green mile" recently and this expresses the sadness that the story brought out, to me at least. I enjoy Stephen King, not everything is horror. THe green mile made me cry when I read it, it was so sad how he had to die innocently. *sigh*
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| from Cultinvator
Tuesday, December 17, 2002 - 23:23
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"Two Thumbs up!"
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| from thepersoniamnow
Tuesday, December 17, 2002 - 21:32
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Yes its original.
First poetry from a movie on here I think!
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| from JoeH
Tuesday, December 17, 2002 - 19:57
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very interesting!
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