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Getting Through : Creative Writing
I Hate Love! | from Bootylicious - Tuesday, December 10, 2002 accessed 2251 times Redundancy and folly! "I Hate Love" I’m dreaming I’m screaming I’m here can’t you see me I’m weak You're smarter You're harder You're tough cuz you're calmer You're strong I hate Love Hate the way it bruises me Hate the way it uses me Hate the way it makes me feel So incomplete Without you I'm trying I'm crying I'm lost and I'm lying To me You're focused You're noticed You're cool and they know this You stand I hate Love Hate the way it grows in me Hate just how it knows that we Hate the way it way it makes us feel So "nobody" Without it I'm broken I'm hopin' I'm out in the open I'm scared You're standing You're handing Your list, you're demanding You take I hate love Hate how it takes hold of me Hate how it controls and sees Hate the way it empties me So totally Without you. I'm clueless I'm useless I'm stuck and love knew this I'm caught You're absent You're full-sensed You think you are godsent You're cool I hate love Hate that it can't satisfy Hate that it can't ease my life Hate the way it simplifies My agony To madness So... I love you But hate it I need you But hate it It's useless To fight it I'm punchless Can't hide it Fuck love! |
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Reader's comments on this article Add a new comment on this article | from loch Wednesday, April 13, 2005 - 08:06 (Agree/Disagree?) Just found this. Can't believe I didn't see it before. Amazing expression of unrequited love! I have read stuff on the subject before, but most people are afraid to put themselfs out there like you did, afraid to seem like the "looser" in the situation. so full of emotion, it's freaking great! (reply to this comment)
| | | | | | | from Nina Tuesday, April 12, 2005 - 22:52 (Agree/Disagree?) just how I feel. Seems like a lot of ex fam kids also have a deep suspicsion of "love". I guess we know how twisted around a person can get in the persuit of the feelings of "love". I don't know alot of "normal" people that see love as a means to control or be controlled. Scary thing, love me no likee (reply to this comment)
| from Tuesday, April 12, 2005 - 21:35 (Agree/Disagree?) fucking awesome (reply to this comment)
| from Anthony Thursday, June 03, 2004 - 11:18 (Agree/Disagree?) Do you hate love and love hate? (reply to this comment)
| from heywood jablome Tuesday, May 25, 2004 - 06:32 (Agree/Disagree?) zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.......wha who.... Oh.............zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz (reply to this comment)
| from Dani Tuesday, May 25, 2004 - 05:40 (Agree/Disagree?) Leave the abusive bastard. (reply to this comment)
| from Joe H Monday, May 24, 2004 - 11:30 (Agree/Disagree?) What this piece lacks in technique, it makes up for in sheer emotional honesty. So many girl "poets" try to sound clever by using big words that they don't know the meanings of, or they follow lousy abstract metaphors to their bizarre conclusions, dragging you through the muck of their convoluted thought processes with them. Girls, take an example from this piece! (reply to this comment)
| From Vicky Wednesday, June 02, 2004, 14:35 (Agree/Disagree?) For what it's worth, Joe, I totally agree with you! -- At least when it comes to my own pitiful attempts at poetry! There are few things I despise more (when it comes to creative expression at least) than my own hugely disappointing contributions to the world of poetry and prose; It doesn't matter what I'm trying to say, if I get the idea to convert it into a poem it inevitably ends up as absolute rubbish! Drives me mad!!! (reply to this comment) |
| | | | | | | | From Ty Erdovjo Tuesday, June 08, 2004, 14:19 (Agree/Disagree?) Dear Joe! I can't believe you finally started making progress, son! Admitting your greatest fear is the first step towards improvement and I must say we are all very proud of you here at the GJIT center! Do not worry if you're the only one who's sexually frustrated - it might pass once you reach a state of ordinary decency and don't forget that this is not about them, it's about you. (Don't lose focus Joe or you'll never recover!) The next step for you now is to THINK through your comments before you post them. I know this will be a huge challenge for you, but hang on in there and take little baby steps as you go. One goal and a time Joe and remember, we're all here to help you son! Finally, to all you devoted Gjitters out there, try to set your resentment aside for a while because if the theory of evolution is ever going to be proven, this guy has to advance from the primate stage and in order for him to do that, he needs all the help and encouragement he can get! Ty Erdovjo Director of the GJIT fund(reply to this comment) |
| | From Elle to Macho Man Monday, June 07, 2004, 15:11 (Agree/Disagree?) Can't take being teased, can you? Wouldn't have thought so about you, Joe! For a moment you had be believing you really had some distance to this Joe's-gotta-be-witty-all-the-time thing. So In true Bridget Jones style: Number of Joe's step out of character today: 1 Number of Joe's step out of character this year: 2 Number of nice comments ever posted by Joe: ___ (please feel free to comment) Number of rude or intimidating comments posted by Joe: More than Bridget can count(reply to this comment) |
| | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | from Baxter Sunday, May 23, 2004 - 14:41 (Agree/Disagree?) The problem with love is not whether it can be defined, but that we associate so many delusions and pointless fantastic assertions to it. Love is merely a misinterpreted combination of less romantic aspects. Man has developed and propagated a myth that love will conquer all, and he has maintained it for generations. Those of us left to live with the legacy of this myth now live with the disappointment. (reply to this comment)
| From love is a mental dependancy Wednesday, April 13, 2005, 11:24 (Agree/Disagree?) And like the ultimate drug addiction that it is, it can cause severe lack of judgement. Love should come with a warning printed on the wrapper: "Do not operate mental machinery, or otherwise drive your life while under the influence of Love. Do not take Love if your pregnant or expect to be soon. Love should never be taken with alchohol. In case of accidental ingestion, shoot yourself in the head."(reply to this comment) |
| | from Wiggles Wednesday, December 11, 2002 - 12:00 (Agree/Disagree?) ?:¬\ ....ouch! (reply to this comment)
| from Someone Wednesday, December 11, 2002 - 10:51 (Agree/Disagree?) If we didn't have love, live would be a lot better for me right now. But in the end, thats really what we live for. Love has good and bad times. Although there is a time to stop ands say enough. It's just not worth the pain with you... (reply to this comment)
| from JoeH Tuesday, December 10, 2002 - 19:11 (Agree/Disagree?) so true! (reply to this comment)
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