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from a sentimal soul... Tuesday, June 07, 2005 - 20:02 (Agree/Disagree?) I thought it was sweet its not every day that I can read a heartbreaking poem like that.... (reply to this comment)

From xolox Wednesday, June 08, 2005, 08:36 (Agree/Disagree?) You should pick up a book with horrendous, sappy poetry. Then you CAN read it everyday.(reply to this comment)

From why, oh why Wednesday, June 08, 2005, 10:50 (Agree/Disagree?) lol...too true. I am wondering why such a lame thread has been given new, unncecessary life though.(reply to this comment)

From xolox Wednesday, June 08, 2005, 12:15 (Agree/Disagree?) Whatever new life it has been given is more like a death twitch than an all out sprint.(reply to this comment)

from neez Wednesday, February 16, 2005 - 17:54 (Agree/Disagree?) (Date last made love to her, 2003-16th January) date we broke up, 2002-12-08....Silly poem posted on January 2005. You must write slowly. (reply to this comment)

from exister Wednesday, February 16, 2005 - 15:15 (Agree/Disagree?) The modern woman certainly can't resist a man who croons here with some Smokey Robinson lyrics. Are you like 19 or something? (reply to this comment)

From Joe H Wednesday, February 16, 2005, 18:15 (Agree/Disagree?) Here's a better song for her: Caroline (par MC Solaar) J'etais cool, assis sur un banc, c'etait le printemps Ils cueillent une marguerite, ce sont deux amants Overdose de douceur, ils jouent comme des enfants Je t'aime un peu, beaucoup, a la folie, passionnement Mais a la suite d'une douloureuse deception sentimentale D'humeur chaleureuse je devenais brutal La haine d'un etre n'est pas dans nos prerogatives Tchernobyl, tcherno-debile! Jalousie radio-active Caroline etait une amie, une superbe fille Je repense a elle, a nous, a nos cornets vanille A sa boulimie de fraises, de framboises, de myrtilles A ses delires futiles, a son style pacotille Je suis l'as de trefle qui pique ton coeur, Caro-Line Comme le trefle a quatre feuilles, je cherche votre bonheur Je suis l'homme qui tombe a pic, pour prendre ton coeur Il faut se tenir a carreau, Caro ce message vient du coeur Une pyramide de baisers, une tempete d'amitie Une vague de caresse, un cyclone de douceur Un ocean de pensees, Caroline je t'ai offert un building de tendresse J'ai une peur bleue, je suis poursuivi par l'armee rouge Pour toi j'ai pris des billets verts, il a fallu qu'je bouge Pyromane de ton coeur, canadair de tes frayeurs Je t'ai offert une symphonie de couleurs Elle est partie, maso Avec un vieux macho Qu'elle avait rencontre dans une station de metro Quand je les vois main dans la main fumant le meme megot Je sens un pincement dans son coeur, mais elle n'ose dire mot Je suis l'as de trefle qui pique ton coeur, Caro-Line Claude MC prend le microphone genre love story ragga muffin Pour te parler d'une amie qu'on appelle Caroline Elle etait ma dame, elle etait ma came Elle etait ma vitamine Elle etait ma drogue, ma dope, ma coke, mon crack Mon amphetamine, Caroline Je repense a elle, femme actuelle, 20 ans, jeune et jolie Remets donc le film a l'envers, magneto de la vie Pour elle, faut-il l'admettre, des larmes ont coule Hemorragie occulaire, vive notre amitie Du passe, du present, je l'espere du futur Je suis passe pour etre present dans ton futur La vie est un jeu de cartes Paris un casino Je joue les rouges ... coeur, Caro Anyone care to proffer an interpretation to these "strong tongues"? (reply to this comment)

From Vicky Wednesday, February 16, 2005, 16:22 (Agree/Disagree?) I think you're being unnecessarily critical here. I doubt that this is an attempt at 'winning her back'. Seems to me it's an expression of hurt and longing. And, yes, romantic lyrics are a bit of a cliche, but I happen to think this song is a very expression of agony of lost love. I think that being tender and honest in one's suffering is rather endearing, and I think you're nasty to pick on someone who's obviously suffering. But that's just my opinion, and I'm the world's biggest sucker for an intensely tortured soul... ; )(reply to this comment)

From Vicky Wednesday, February 16, 2005, 16:28 (Agree/Disagree?) *...I happen to think this song is a very touching expression of the agony of lost love.' Damn, I need to get myself to bed, I guess.(reply to this comment)

from Joe H Wednesday, February 16, 2005 - 13:56 (Agree/Disagree?) Publicly announcing that you had post-breakup sex is sure to win her back, buddy! And who the hell calls it "making love"? Are you still in the cult or something? (reply to this comment)

From Jana Tuesday, June 07, 2005, 11:09 (Agree/Disagree?) Hey come on guys.. maybe the poem is a bit cliche.. but this guy seems sincere. I know what its like to lose the one you love and know you'll never get him back... so lay off the poor fella. (reply to this comment)